Cha0tic221's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[legend of the Hat]

Uhhhh.....

Try to avoid making flashes out of anything other than Macromedia or Adobe flash. If you can't afford a copy, talk to your school. Most schools have an unlimited trial version that they may be able to help you with. Until then, avoid using third party programs like this.

Funny thing though, when I actually first started flash, I did something like this as well. Soon after talking to some people I found out what flash really is, Haha. I used a GIF animator and made stuff with that. D:

OH well.

Ninjagaiden201 responds:

That is really helpful. Thanks for the advice.

[Pencilmation 11]

meh

Your animations are always decent but never anything great. It's all just some slow paced completely random bs story....

and wtf is up with the ending? They become gay together and start a life together in the old home?

Boring....

[Links End]

Decent.

Overall, not bad, but I would suggest making the fight scenes faster. It's not very exciting when a character just runs forward jumps and swipes midair all in the time frame of like 5 seconds. Just quicken the pace a bit.

[Jumper Stick]

Good

Definately inspired by Shock and past FA's work. Nonetheless this was good. I liked the subtle Portal Gun sound effect used for the "jumping". Never watched Jumper so I don't know if this relates to the story at all.

Overall good but would have liked to see more. Just a generic... "more". You definately have the potential. Use it.

[The Amazing Adam Android]

Pretty cool.

Also, ending theme of Fooly Cooly = instant win. Greatest anime ever.

[I'm a PC: 14 YO Edition]

All the 0's reviews are right.

There was nothing good about this in any way.

Im not gonna flame you for doing what you've done, I'm actually gonna go over things. OMG

K, graphics, poorly done. Try smoothing out the animation instead of just going from one frame to another and back again. Do frames in between the smooth the movements into it.

Sound, the music was louder than your voice, or whoevers it was, idk. Could not understand what you said other than wowzers...

Its not that you don't know how to draw, its that you don't do enough drawing. Put more gradual movement into the animation. Even just raising an arm should take at least 5 frames or else it looks choppy and poorly done.

If you beleive that you worked hard on this, then good job, you probably made yourself better. Just keep trying and work on the things i mentioned.

[RC: Super Mario Bros.]

Nothing exactly new...

It was okay but I mean, who cares about Toad... I don't want to hear him whine with his bull crap. Threw me for a bit of a loop when he started yelling. I thought it was going to be a gay knock off of mad mad mario although it sort of turned out to be....

Anyway, good job making the front page. But the sound quality was a bit low, try getting a better microphone or edit out the static or something. Also, yeh, it does look like you traced the graphics and colored it slightly better.

[Cave Babies Ep 1]

Cool but...

It was very well animated and had a more professional look but the sound effects could use some work. A lot of them were at different volumes and some scratchy.

Very good job though. Try experimenting with color next time maybe.